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I remember forests as I remember dreams
bit familiar, yet still hard to get
like a word on the tip of your tongue
but never past your lips

but I remember the paper planes
drowning in the oceans
that belonged to the trains
and the forests are like that too
only hidden
but still visible in a child's play
Hello, poem.
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like how you depicted the aspects of life that cannot be expressed verbally and exist to bewilder.
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BeautifulWinter Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Writer
Thank you :)
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Adonael Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No worries!
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Estuari Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
I like how you used imagery to describe something that is near ineffable and sometimes flummoxing.
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BeautifulWinter Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2013   Writer
Thank you for the comment :)
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SpiderMilkshake Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Professional General Artist
It made me FEEL! Must fave it then. :thumbsup:
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BeautifulWinter Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013   Writer
Hope you feel good, then! Thank you :)
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